I think you may be right about this David..... he was always thinking of his fans.
Sent: Thursday, May 10, 2018 at 10:49 AM
From: "David Garcia" <garcia10303@gmail.com>
To: "Words List Member" <Words@brothersgibb.com>
Subject: [Words] Robins "Statement From Doctors" Report
Robin may have requested the info be made available upon his passing. Given the rumors surrounding Andy's death, and controversy surrounding how Maurice was tended to in hospital care, perhaps he thought it reasonable just to let it all be made p
But I'm just guessing...
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David Garcia, who gets squeamish just thinking about autopsies in NYC
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On Thu, May 10, 2018, 9:28 AM Terry Tucker <
rg5@mail.com> wrote:
As the date of Robins passing nears coming on 6 years now .. I am once again finding myself crying evenmore then i usually do over him being gone..... but I also am remembering the Statement that was released from Robins Doctors. Wh
Usually when a celbrity is quite ill you only hear bits and pieces of what might be going on withthem... or sometimes there is no word at all until the celebrity aactually passes away. I believe that with robin we were pretty
But it is very unusual that a Doctors report woulfd be released .. yes to the family but not ever to the public... i mena what about the phrase Doctor/Patient Confidentiality? Whose idea do you think it was to have it released to th
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Date: Fri, 11 May 2018 19:17:42 +0200
From: "Terry Tucker" <5ForRobin@mail.com>
Subject: Andy and Sam
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Date: Fri, 11 May 2018 19:19:44 +0200
From: "Terry Tucker" <5ForRobin@mail.com>
Subject: Re: Archive Section of Chris' BG Website
Thank you Chirs.... hope you will keep the archives online forever as a legacy to The Bee Gees and to your wonderful website. Terry
Sent: Tuesday, May 08, 2018 at 11:20 PM
From: "Chris Mathis" <cmathis@brothersgibb.com>
To: "Words List Member" <Words@brothersgibb.com>
Subject: [Words] Archive Section of Chris' BG Website
Should be all set…
Chris…
From: Words@brothersgibb.com <Words@brothersgibb.com> On Behalf Of Terry Tucker
Sent: Sunday, April 29, 2018 2:28 PM
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Subject: [Words] Archive Section of Chris' BG Website
Can anyone just tell me if they can get into the Archives section of Chris' website here? I cant get it to open??? Thank you.
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Date: Fri, 11 May 2018 10:52:39 -0700
From: Julie Brenner <julesbrenner_rn@yahoo.com>
Subject: Re: Request for help -- "Doncha know" how to write good lyrics?
I agree with Chris. His suggestions were good. I would also put a bridge in towards the end and change the music up to give it more appeal otherwise it sounds a tad monotonous. Not being critical for I also write lyrics and have a CD out. It just needs so
Good luck.
Julie
AZ
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> On May 10, 2018, at 9:20 PM, Chris Mathis
wrote:
>
> I really like it David. I like that you added harmony in this song. I do wish that the harmony was a little was a little stronger, that it stood out more.
>
> I maybe would change a word here and there perhaps. I don’t know=E2
>
> For example, you state: “All alone, and there's nothing left to save me”, the word ‘and’ seems a little disconnecting. What if it read, “All alone, with nothing left to save me=9D, this to me sounds more desperate, more connected to being a
>
> You also say, “Just lost in the storm”. “the storm” seems to define an object, (the storm/relationship) that your lost in, but if you stated, “Just lost in a storm”, this seems to highlight your present condition in that storm.
>
> Does this make sense? It could also be that I do not know what the fuc& I=E2m talking about.
>
> Please please take no offence. I really liked the song when you first sent it to me.
>
> Please send me more!!!
>
> Chris…
>
>
>
>
> From: Words@brothersgibb.com On Behalf Of David Garcia
> Sent: Thursday, May 10, 2018 10:40 AM
> To: Words List Member
> Subject: [Words] Request for help -- "Doncha know" how to write good lyrics?
>
> A while back, I sent Chris a demo of one of my songs "Don't You Know" -- which, with my Sarah Palinesque midwestern accent, sounds more like "Doncha Know." And I am looking for ways to improve the song.
>
> I think the lyrics might need work. Any particular line in the song that stands out as subpar?
>
> Lyrics as follows:
>
> "Don't You Know" by David Garcia
>
> Nothing left for us to say
> There's no reason to return
> I'd surrender everything I have
> But what good would it do?
>
> All alone, and there's nothing left to save me
> You were all that I knew
>
> Don't you know, that it's you I've always dreamed of
> And now that you're gone
> Here I am in a world that doesn't know me
> Just lost in the storm
>
> Don't you know that I built my world around you
> And what happens now?
> Just a face in a dream I'll never wake from
> Since you were the one
>
> You and I, our hearts were the same
> Always beating as one
> Then one day, I just turn around
> And find everything is gone
>
> Who'd believe that it all could change so easy
> But what can I do?
>
> https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B3dANM9Oqsh_eFJHdWE1WVpuVU5IazNzOEp0bWxMSEticElZ
>
>
> And, for Bee Gees related content:
>
> If there is any line that stands out to you in a Bee Gees song, more than any other -- for better or for worse -- what good will it be?
>
> One of my favorites, from King and Country: "All the love of my mother, I offer to you." For some reason that always really gets to me...
>
> .
> David Garcia, who would rather do twenty push-ups than fix a bad lyric, and can't even do any push-ups at all in NYC
> .
>
>
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